Many governments think that economic grow is their most important goal. Some people, however, thinks that other type of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A number of higher authorities think that economic

growth

is the most crucial goal for the betterment of the

country

. Whereas, on other hand, some individuals insist that not only economic

growth

but there are

also

some other types of progress which are equally essential for the

development

of the

country

.

To begin

with, governments think that economic

growth

is very important in developing countries as well as in developed countries because it helps the citizens of the nation to become better in

their

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every aspect of life. Prioritizing the economy, helps the nation to achieve the primary needs of the people

such

as food, shelter, security, and accommodation.

Moreover

, a powerful economic

country

helps the government to make more money and

then

utilise that money on developing facilities which

leads

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to enhancing the quality of one's life and bringing prosperity to their region. Take China as an example, China's people have a far better lifestyle as they are government invested more in the

development

of the economy rather than investing in other sections.

On the other hand

, there are

also

some other types of progress

such

as education facilities as well as tourism

development

. To illustrate

this

,

as

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we know that if the literacy level in a particular state is higher so, it becomes easy for a

country

to achieve their goals more efficiently. ,

Furthermore

tourism

development

also

plays a vital role to generate income for the nation

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,

therefore

the government should take necessary steps

such

as advertising beautiful monuments , parks , and eco-friendly areas. These measures will directly attract tourists to visit their

country

. For, example there are many European countries that generate income from tourist attractions. To conclude

this

topic, I personally believe that underdeveloped regions should prefer

on

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economic

growth

in order to acquire the primary needs

for

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the citizens. ,

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education and tourism innovations should be adopted by developing and developed lands.