Many governments think that economic grow is their most important goal. Some people, however, thinks that other type of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A number of higher authorities think that economic

growth

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is the most crucial goal for the betterment of the

country

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. Whereas, on other hand, some individuals insist that not only economic

growth

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but there are

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some other types of progress which are equally essential for the

development

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of the

country

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.

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with, governments think that economic

growth

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is very important in developing countries as well as in developed countries because it helps the citizens of the nation to become better in

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every aspect of life. Prioritizing the economy, helps the nation to achieve the primary needs of the people

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as food, shelter, security, and accommodation.

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, a powerful economic

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helps the government to make more money and

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utilise that money on developing facilities which

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to enhancing the quality of one's life and bringing prosperity to their region. Take China as an example, China's people have a far better lifestyle as they are government invested more in the

development

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of the economy rather than investing in other sections.

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, there are

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some other types of progress

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as education facilities as well as tourism

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we know that if the literacy level in a particular state is higher so, it becomes easy for a

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to achieve their goals more efficiently. ,

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tourism

development

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also

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plays a vital role to generate income for the nation

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,

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the government should take necessary steps

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as advertising beautiful monuments , parks , and eco-friendly areas. These measures will directly attract tourists to visit their

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. For, example there are many European countries that generate income from tourist attractions. To conclude

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topic, I personally believe that underdeveloped regions should prefer

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economic

growth

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in order to acquire the primary needs

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the citizens. ,

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education and tourism innovations should be adopted by developing and developed lands.