Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefits students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Scholarships can be a huge support for

students

in order to complete their studies at university. Some

people

argue that

students

ought to pay

completely

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the expenses of studying

due

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to university

education

would

be

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return benefits only to

students

not to the entire

society

. I

vehement

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disagree with

this

statement. In

this

essay, I will discuss how supporting and encouraging

students

by taking over some cost of their

study

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studies

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have benefits

in

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the whole community.

To begin

with, nowadays, costs for

further

study are a bit expensive and not everyone can afford it ,and if there is no aid financial to cover their expenses for

education

ultimately,

this

can

led

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to a significant reduction in the number of graduates.

As a result

, in the industry arena will not get great quality among employees or

manages

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that role in the companies

due to

the lack of background and

the

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knowledge

of what they are working.

Therefore

, the business will be under threat

to fall

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down

and

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to

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its

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constantly.

Hence

, as much as

this

affects business and companies as will affect the economy of the country,

in particular

in

society

such

as

,

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the prices of goods will experience a

sharply

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rise.

Furthermore

, the lack of graduate

people

in the community would have a bit of

merits

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in the level of consciousness and

knowledge

of

society

.

For instance

, these days,

knowledge

is quite crucial for adults and kids too, if the parents do not have the

knowledge

or basics in

education

,

thus

they cannot help their child

for

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doing homework and

guide

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them or

give

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them advice for some

further

study.

Moreover

,

this

cannot gain a good result probably children will not get the motivation to

make

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follow their dreams and do whatever they want, as much as a parent is the most

people

that can encourage the young

people

.

To sum up

,

students

should not cover all the costs of

further

education

in university

due to

many drawbacks, consist in

society

and in individuals.