Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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think that economic

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is their most important goal. Some

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, think that other types of

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are equally important for a

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. The purpose of

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essay is to analyse both sides of view and

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explain my opinion that the expansion of the economy is not the only primary goal in contemporary society. In the government's aspect, In order to prove that

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have efficiency and should have opportunities to govern a

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again from the election in democratic countries. The

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must make economic

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so that peoples in the

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have a better financial status that the past

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, In dictatorship countries,

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have a lot of corruption and take advantage of local

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. We can see that majority of dictatorship countries have a financial discrimination problem.

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, Millionaires in Thailand have more poverty than 75% when contrasted with poorer in the

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who have a proportion of the majority population in the

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, They do not have better financial status. In some

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's aspect, there are

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advantages of investing in other types of developments with an equal amount of effort.

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, the development of infrastructure that makes

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comfortable

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as elderly

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with disabilities can use public transport easily and finger-crossed. Even if developments cannot make rapid economic

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that will make merit in a longer period.

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, It makes

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recommend and support to

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of public transport. In conclusion, there are merits in both sides of the argument. On balance,

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, I believe that the argument of having developments in different social domains rather than solely focusing on boosting the economic level is a better view.

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is because social development as a whole can truly bring diversity and fair opportunities for the general public, leading to stronger bonds between citizens and their belief in

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