Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many
governments
think that economic
progress
is their most important goal. Some
people
,
on the other hand
, think that other types of
progress
are equally important for a
country
. The purpose of
this
essay is to analyse both sides of view and
then
explain my opinion that the expansion of the economy is not the only primary goal in contemporary society. In the government's aspect, In order to prove that
governments
have efficiency and should have opportunities to govern a
country
again from the election in democratic countries. The
governments
must make economic
progress
so that peoples in the
country
have a better financial status that the past
governments
.
Moreover
, In dictatorship countries,
Governments
have a lot of corruption and take advantage of local
people
. We can see that majority of dictatorship countries have a financial discrimination problem.
For example
, Millionaires in Thailand have more poverty than 75% when contrasted with poorer in the
country
who have a proportion of the majority population in the
country
.
however
, They do not have better financial status. In some
people
's aspect, there are
also
advantages of investing in other types of developments with an equal amount of effort.
For example
, the development of infrastructure that makes
people
comfortable
such
as elderly
people
/
people
with disabilities can use public transport easily and finger-crossed. Even if developments cannot make rapid economic
progress
.
However
, I
sure
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am sure
show examples
that will make merit in a longer period.
For example
, It makes
people
recommend and support to
use
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users
show examples
of public transport. In conclusion, there are merits in both sides of the argument. On balance,
however
, I believe that the argument of having developments in different social domains rather than solely focusing on boosting the economic level is a better view.
This
is because social development as a whole can truly bring diversity and fair opportunities for the general public, leading to stronger bonds between citizens and their belief in
governments
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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