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What can be done to reduce air pollution in the cities. Write a solution essay

Air
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pollution
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 is an environmental issue that affects each of us but we are
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 the cause of
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 problem. Cities
where the number of the population is the biggest
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, where the number of the population is the biggest,
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 suffer from
air
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pollution
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. So, what could we do to solve
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 problem?
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public transport more efficiently. Public buses, trams, subways, and trains aren't only more affordable than driving your own car, they
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 help cut congestion and reduce
air
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pollution
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. If we start using public transport, the
exhausted
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exhaust
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 fumes will be decreased and it will help to reduce the level of the harmful gases in the atmosphere. It would e a great idea if people will be encouraged to carpool.
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, companies could provide carpool schemes for their employees. In
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 way, people who work at one and the same place could travel together using one vehicle.
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, dangerous emissions in the
air
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 will be cut down. Another solution is to walk or cycle more. Aside from the fact that walking and cycling produce zero emissions, these activities are
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 good for your health, so you can get a workout out of travelling. To sum up there are different and useful solutions to the problem
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 the
air
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pollution
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 in big cities which people and companies could do. Whatever we do we always have to think about being friendly to the place where we live.

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