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A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses. Why do many countries face water shortages, and what could be done to alleviate the problem?

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Nowadays, there is a growing concern about
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 shortage in cities all over the world.
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 crisis has made daily life a lot harder for people. There are a number of reasons for
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 problem among which are overuse of
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 by people and bad agricultural policies.
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 essay will examine these reasons, and suggest potential solutions as well. Arguably, the most important issue in terms of
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 scarceness is the intentional and unintentional overuse of
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 in houses.
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 because people now find it easy to have
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 through the plumbs and do not value it that much.
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, they tend to use too much of it without thinking about preserving it for others and future generations.
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, they wash their cars with drinking
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 or let the
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 pour down the whole time when they are taking a shower. A solution is for the government to increase the prices of household
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 and at the same time, launch publicity campaigns on how to reduce
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 use and how difficult it is to bring
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 into cities, thereby raising awareness of the public on the importance of
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. Another problem is the inefficient approaches used in agriculture.
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 to say, many farming systems around the world are still traditional and do not use modern technology.
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, countries that are naturally drier and have lower sources of
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 cultivate crops that need high quantities of
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.
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, the groundwater resources are extracted excessively. The way forward must be for authorities to ban illegal wells and drilling, encourage and subsidize modern irrigation equipment and prohibit the growth of products that consume high amounts of
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. These measures can highly reduce
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usage
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 in the agriculture sector. In conclusion, it seems to me that
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 shortage trouble is deeply rooted in its bad
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 in household and agriculture sectors. As I see it, governments and decision-makers all have a role in tackling these issues. It is important to take steps in reducing
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 life for future generations will be devastating.

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