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Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Over the past decades, the world has evolved and changed in ways of thinking about the way of success. Some people have a notion that getting a university
education
 is the ultimate way to gain achievements in life, while others have different sentiments about it. They believe it is not a correct way of thinking anymore in
this
 technology age.
However
,
this
 essay will seek to examine the complex issue, and eventually, my opinion will be given. On the one hand, I would like to point out that there are various reasons to consider getting the advantages of
university
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education
. Before all else, the use of
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ground breaking
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 and state of the art teaching materials at universities will enhance the student's abilities and empower
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 knowledge regarding the current affairs of the world.
Moreover
, most popular companies prefer to employ students from popular universities and the youngsters may get straightforward access
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 their career transitions.
For example
, in India, top
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university
 students are used to
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 scholarships and job offers from other popular countries,
such
 as Japan and Korea, and they can even get a chance
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 there.
On the other hand
, I would like to express an equal view that there are several possible ways to gain a successful life without getting an academic
education
.
First
, despite the fact that the importance of
education
 is undeniable, there are many people with enormous wealth and achievements without any academic degrees. Particularly, they invested their
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 to attain practical experiences rather than wasting time
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studying unrelated things.
As a result
, those
expertises
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 bring them on a pathway of
being
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success
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.
For instance
, people who have work
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 at the age of 25 can be able to handle
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 own business compared to the students who get a degree at the same age without any practical experience. In conclusion,
although
 there are some arguments and different opinions, I passionately believe that the integration of academic school degrees and having practical experiences will drive our subsequent generation to be robust and powerful. In order to do that, I would suggest that the government and educational authorities should implement some adjustments between learning theory and doing hands-on projects.
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