Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
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Wherever communities have many types of computer-based materials which are assisted to improve their life in a better manner. Even though some people argued that it hasReplace the punctuation
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detrimental effects on individuals as well as the society. Change the adjective
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To begin
with, wherever the public is using social media apps without their control. Furthermore
, individuals are trying to utilize increasingly their free time with these platforms. For example
, most of the time children were punished by their parents because they concerned
about their worst demeanour and dedication to their education as they used Facebook, Add a missing verb
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As a result
,it takes them self-centred and they automatically become selfish personalities. Also
, they try to live isolated band become a victim by
destructive methods.
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, society has the biggest impact which are
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Besides
, some negative minded humans are attempting to spread fraud and controversial information among the community. For instance
, people who want to break the peace among different religious groups in society put hatred posts and viedios. Consequently
, it would make brutal incidents and the public would not be able to make their life easier.
In conclusion, from my perspective, I believe that certainly, social media apps have a
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apps in a productive way , can achieve our goals and have a chance to improve our standard lifestyle.Submitted by skrodrigo030 on
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