Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, people have to live in a competitive world, so we have to have the valuable skills for working life.

Thus

, some believe

children

should have to be more skilful than

others

, but some argue that

children

should have to cooperate with

others

, so

this

kind of thing is essential as well. These are vital for

children

to be growing up an adult in the future, and I will discuss both advantages of

this

statement. If

children

learn to contest with each other, it will motivate them to increase their skills and improve their competencies;

for example

, in the running races, they always acknowledge who in the

first

range is the most proficient, so

children

will make an effort to be in the position; they set the goal and attempt to reach their aim, they will practice and learn to manage and plan to conquer their purpose;

moreover

, if they accomplish it, they will be more proud of themselves, and try to be better. From these examples, they will acquire capabilities,

for instance

, how to manage times, learn to be disciplined to improve regularly and try to escalate what they still lack.

On the other hand

, the minors have to live in society, and most work has to coordinate with teammates.

Thus

, they have to learn the collaborative and interpersonal skills to make productive results;

for example

, in the agency company, you have the creative position, you have to come up with a good idea in the same way you have to convey the thinking to

others

, but if you do not know how to picture your idea to them, they cannot build up a thing as you want the consequence is the group can not relate to each other; It is a hardship to complete the work because we can not complete the work alone, we have to collaborate to

others

. In conclusion,

children

should know what competition is to make them improve their abilities, but they should realize that they have to live in a community, so they have to adapt themselves to live in a society.