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People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the most significant of these problems? How can these problems be tackled?

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Urban citizens are dealing with numerous
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 in their lives. I believe exploring the causes of
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 problem can assist in finding solutions to resolve it. Overcrowding could partly account for several
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 that urban citizens are faced. Since a large proportion of
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 prefer to live in the
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, the hustle and bustle of
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 grow up, and
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 deal with traffic congestion every day and waste a significant amount of time in traffic jams. In
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 as noise and air pollution. To address
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 issue, it is the government's responsibility to provide better public transport. By doing so,
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 will be incentivized to use less their private cars. The fast pace of
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 explain why there are several
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 in big
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 face. In
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 way,
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 are always in a rush to complete their daily tasks, which results in numerous mental
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 as anxiety and depression. If the government and authorities were able to provide the same facilities in rural areas,
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 would be incentivized to move to the suburbs. By doing so, they would not put much pressure on themselves to have a calm and peaceful
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. In
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 way, they can enjoy their
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 better and have more fun. To conclude, even though the fast pace of
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 and overcrowding have contributed to numerous
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 in big
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 that
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 deal with, the government can remedy the situation. In my opinion, better public transportation and better living plans are steps in the right direction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • metropolis
  • commute
  • public transportation
  • gridlock
  • air pollution
  • noise pollution
  • expensive housing
  • exorbitant prices
  • work-life balance
  • recreation areas
  • parks and gardens
  • criminal activities
  • security measures
  • density
  • neighborhood
  • public amenities
  • healthcare facilities
  • educational institutions
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