In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching a large number of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

These days people place a premium on their studies. Some people think, that children should participate in lectures to learn, while
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argue that, gone is the idea of participating in a class due to the development of technology. In my
view
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there is no justification for attending lectures. To advance a convincing theory I could deal with, these days with the advent of technology our lives
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changed beyond recognition. There are different sources to be taught.
For example
, the most popular ones are
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YouTube, Google and
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link deep
. You can search
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whatever
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what ever
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you want,
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from science and math to cosmetics and art. No matter what. Thanks to these technologies you can self-study.
Additionally
, you don’t need to waste a lot of time on transportation.
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it is important to note that, you have access to the
classes
whenever and wherever you are.
Although
we can participate in different
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classes
,
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classes
have other goals. The
first
thing I should mention is, communicating with other people.
In addition
to what I have just said, if you have a question, you can ask
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your tutor. On top of that learning
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better on the grounds that, you have the chance to participate in class discussion.
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, since universities have started, I understand the lessons better than in online
classes
. Not
last
but not least you can make friends. To conclude, there are different methods of learning. You should decide which one to choose. But for
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the best
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is always online
classes
.
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