You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear Harman, I hope you are having a good time with your family. I must confess to you that your siblings are super cool and I loved yesterday's party with them at your place. I am writing

this

letter to tell you about a little damage that happened because of me. While we were enjoying your dad's old collection of wines, I went to the bar counter to pour another glass of wine but accidentally broke two glasses as they fell from my hands because I was feeling a little dizzy. I am really feeling sad about that accident and I know that you'll not say anything to me, but I want to make up for my mistake. So, I have ordered a beautiful pair of wine glasses which will arrive tomorrow at your place. I will be super happy if you accept my gift with a huge smile on your face and I am sure you will going to love my taste.

Lastly

, let me know when are you planning to visit me. Hoping to see you soon my dearest friend Yours lovingly, Jasmeen

Submitted by mile.jasmeenkaur12 on Sat May 28 2022

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7 paragraphs

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8.50

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