You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear Harman, I hope you are having a good time with your family. I must confess to you that your siblings are super cool and I loved yesterday's party with them at your place. I am writing

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letter to tell you about a little damage that happened because of me. While we were enjoying your dad's old collection of wines, I went to the bar counter to pour another glass of wine but accidentally broke two glasses as they fell from my hands because I was feeling a little dizzy. I am really feeling sad about that accident and I know that you'll not say anything to me, but I want to make up for my mistake. So, I have ordered a beautiful pair of wine glasses which will arrive tomorrow at your place. I will be super happy if you accept my gift with a huge smile on your face and I am sure you will going to love my taste.

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, let me know when are you planning to visit me. Hoping to see you soon my dearest friend Yours lovingly, Jasmeen

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

185 words

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You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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some people spend most of their time lives living close to where they born.what are the reasons and explain advantage and disadvantage

Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.