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You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited. In your letter include: – Why you are writing – What you’ve been doing since you last spoke together – Apologize for still having the items and ask how you can return them

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Hello Josiah, How have you been doing? Hope you and your family are doing well It’s a very long time since we have not met each other. I am writing
this
 letter to let you remind you had left your belongings like a pants belt, a hankey, and one t-shirt, in my house on your
last
 visit on my birthday. I was cleaning my room; where I found a bag with your belongings, I remembered that to return, but due to my hectic schedule of work, I forgot to remind and send you it. Remember,
last
 2 years ago, we met at my birthday party, you and your family visited our house and we celebrated in a hotel and we visited many places near to our city and we had fun a lot. I sincerely apologise for reminding you about your left belonging and now I want to make my mistake correct by sending your belongings to you immediately. Please let me know how I can return it to you or I could courier it to you at your address. Hope you would forgive me for
such
 a silly mistake Your friend Rajat
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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