Grandparents take care of the children when their parents are out at work. What are the advantages and possible disadvantages of this?

There is no doubt that

grandparents

have a significant role in looking after their grandchildren. Nowadays, parents leave their

kids

with their

grandparents

when they go to work, and

although

this

phenomenon has its benefits, like bonding between the

grandparents

and the children, it can have a few setbacks,

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hand, when

kids

spend time with their

grandparents

they develop a healthy relationship with them.

For example

, when children feel that their

grandparents

have a significant role in their

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, they are more likely to feel well-cared for and more loved.

Furthermore

, parents could save money that way, because

while

grandparents

will take care of their

kids

for free, hiring a babysitter would cost them money.

On the other hand

, there could be drawbacks to

this

behaviour.

Firstly

, older people do not have competent cognitive abilities.

This

is because when people get older, their brain function deteriorates,

as a result

, they could unintentionally put themselves and their grandchildren in danger.

For instance

, they could set the house on fire by accident.

Second,

even though the elderly have a special fondness for their grandchildren, they might not have the energy to take care of the special needs of a child at all times. If they needed sleep,

for instance

, they would not be able to get it with a child in the house.

To sum up

, despite the fact that leaving

kids

to their

grandparents

can have various benefits, like special parental bonds and saving money, there could be possible drawbacks, like exposing the

kids

to hazards, and putting too much pressure on the older ones.