A test for cycling should be mandatory. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that cycling should be encouraged as a way of transportation.
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I believe that there should be tests to control bicycles on the
road
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, I do not think that these should be necessary for everyone who wants to ride a bike.
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, bicycles can be hazardous to the rider and the
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,
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we should make sure that cyclists are competent enough.
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, a person who has recently learned how to ride a bike should not be allowed to use it on a
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full of cars and people. If we let them ride their bikes without a test, we will not only expose them to the dangers of traffic accidents, but we will
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put those around them in imminent danger.
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, I do not think that
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should be a mandatory requirement for everyone.
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is because those who want to learn how to ride bicycles need places to practice before cycling on the
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. Recent cyclists,
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, will feel more comfortable once they rode their
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in a safe place, beforehand.
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, giving them a wide space to practice will give them a chance to master cycling,
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it will greatly
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the accident rates. In conclusion,
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I believe that cyclist testing is necessary to avoid
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accidents, I
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think that it should not be mandatory because new cyclists need to practice before we can let them ride on the
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, where they are surrounded by other vehicles and pedestrians.
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