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The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books, and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People generally use the
library
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 to get some
information
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 from
books
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 as well as borrow
books
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 for entertainment purposes.
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, due to advancements in
technology
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 modern
libraries
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 are providing computer and internet facilities too.
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, some argue that authorities should not waste space and money on these high
technology
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libraries
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.
however
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, I partially agree with
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 notion. In past when there was no choice of resources for getting
information
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 other than
books
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 and someone has to waste hours to find a relevant book and
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 find the desired topic from the book. But now with the advancement of
technology
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 , we have easy alternatives to get knowledge in the blink of an eye with the help of computers and the internet.
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,
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 could save time and money too, because these are just investments with which we can make a profit for decades.
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, with the help of these computers, someone can ask for
information
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 about organisations and institutes by mailing them who cannot afford their personal compute.
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, a month ago I wanted some
information
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 about a course from a renowned university but I had no internet connection so I used the public
library
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 for
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 purpose.
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, if we just consider it is a public
library
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 and mostly used by the retired people who generally prefer
books
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 to read and finding some
information
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 rather than gadgets.
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 these high tech
libraries
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 seem to be a waste of money and space. Because there is hardly any person who uses these CD's, DVD's to seek
information
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 .
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, in
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 case, authorities should notice which
library
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 people demand high
technology
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libraries
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 and
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 build these
libraries
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 according to the demands and facilities population demands . In conclusion, public
libraries
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 play an important role in society by giving an opportunity to the public to remain updated and intellectual.
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 , having these high
technology
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libraries
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 add more facility to the general public but these should be in limited number so that the resources seem not to be wasted.
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