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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Bullying is an act to look down on and blame other
people
. Nowadays, We can find a problem with bullying in many schools.
Accordingly
, In the following paragraph, I will explain the
factor
 and solutions to change
this
 situation. On the one hand, We can assume a
factor
 is different teaching methods in each family.
For example
, Family A is rich and always takes care of a
child
 by sending and picking up a
child
 from school every day but the Family B is poorer than Family A which will affect the parents' focus on work more than on raising a
child
.
Then
, Children in Family B felt jealous of friends in Family A. It brings bullying.
Moreover
, A physical appearance can be a partial
factor
 in bullying.
For instance
, the fattest or smallest children in the classroom may be a victim of bullying.
In addition
, there is a new type of bullying called cyberbullying.
This
factor
 appears in a comment on social media or in humorous friend pictures. So, we can search by surfing the internet. In general, contrasting with other bullying weaker
people
 may be a victim than stronger
people
 but in
cyberbullying
Add a comma
,cyberbullying
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 weaker
people
 can use social media to bully other
people
 too.
On the other hand
, We should have a measure to solve
this
 problem.
Firstly
, Teachers should teach about bullying that the worst behaviour and that all kinds of humans should respect human rights altogether.
Secondly
, Teachers and Families should admonish when a
child
 bullies a friend. In conclusion, I discovers that bullying came from three factors namely teaching in the family, a physical appearance and social media. It is still a problem that must be changed behaviour.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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