Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside? What problems does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays in some places, youth have been abandoning their relationships and hometowns to live in

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that are bigger and have more amenities , there

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of factors to

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,but certain measures could be taken to alleviate

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problem. there are several causes of

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issue, if I had to pick the significant one,

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I would go for to obtain the better opportunities to live. In rural

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, living is based on agriculture and animal husbandry. In

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the balance between the countryside residents and farms is broken by increasing the rate of population .

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my grandfather 's farm was divided by five children ,

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kids were decreasing, so my father has forced to leave his village .

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some

country sides

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do not have

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suitable amenities .namely, road, school , university and so on.

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there is a rural area in the south of Iran that

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not have drinking water and has the most rate of young human who immigrated to

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. the most appropriate remedy whereby residents of the rural area could overcome

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predicament. In the

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place is the government should distribute the suitable facilities

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as roads, shops, universities and so on in the place

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developed. It can be realized ,

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the policies man does not have enough pay attention to the

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development

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, it would lead to the immigration of many people to developing places. It is clear that people attempt to get a standard situation for living. So it is

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item to any governments that allocated the budget to whole zones in their country without discrimination , due to the fact that it can prevent to leave

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.

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as building the hospital. developed the instructions of standard living. I would like to close

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argument. some young people leave their hometowns to get the opportunity to work and live in the places that are developed ,

also

the governments should pay attention to whole

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at the same. I recommended the governments have to make interesting the countrysides