Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that most of the authorities in most

countries

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have a goal

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improving

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economy

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of their

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as it is very important from their perspectives.

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, some citizens point out that other various categories are as important as economic progress.

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my opinion, I strongly believe

with

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the latter and discuss both of these views in

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essay.

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of all, governments have a tendency to do whatever it takes to enhance the

economy

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since they already believed that money is the most powerful source that can solve anything which might be related to any other types of progress and upgrade the standard

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of livings

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livings

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of

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of their

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.

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, if wars happened between

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,

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with stable financial

supports

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would likely

to

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have a better chance to win or

to stay

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out of the conflict zones.

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, it is undeniable that if

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of one country was great, the salaries of the people would be high and

unempoyment

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unemployment

rates would

be low

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which is one of the best qualifications of

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country.

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, opponents of

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phenomenon highlight that

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and mental health of the people are more important than money. if ones

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physically or mentally, they can surely not work well which can result in falling in productivity and creativity that can

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cause

the declining effects on

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.

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,

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which is the most

distrubing

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disturbing

and

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disappointing

thing is the root of

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because

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invaded each other since poverties in their

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made them

to

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apply

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conquer

others

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lands, resources and etc. To conclude, I pen down saying that both sides have

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own pros and cons,

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,

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has more demerits rather than merits so we can't possibly consider that it is the most important goal.