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The internet is the best place to find information. Do you agree disagree ?

#internet #place #information
It's a common opinion that
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 the best way for searching a piece of
information
information
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is
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internet
. To be honest, I partially agree with
this
 idea.
First
 of all, nowadays, it's not easy to find
information
 online, and an increasing number of fake news and fake website have invaded the world of the
internet
. In
this
 period, a growing number of people
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 pretty sure to have a
lot
 of knowledge just because they can Google it.
For example
, a
lot
 of people think to know something about medicine, biology and so on because they have a phone.
Moreover
, the pandemic period with the social network
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 has created a
lot
 of conflict between people with 2 different opinions.
Otherwise
, I consider
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 the
internet
 a special invention, with our devices we are able to search and find most of the
information
 needed. I do believe, that a
lot
 of jobs like scientists, journalists and so on are improved with the web. Especially, because it's possible to search and share
information
 in one
second
, without problems, but, as previously mentioned
this
 could be good or bad.
On the other hand
, without a doubt, research on the
internet
 is 10 times easier than
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research on the books at the library, because you have to check the website and not 1000 books, and it's possible to do it directly from home.
Furthermore
, it's cheaper and it's not needed anymore to rent or buy books or articles because it's possible to find them on some
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. In conclusion, I think, that
internet
 is the best place to find
information
 but, depends on who is doing the research and their own abilities to do it and filter the news.
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