You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear David,
It was delighting to hear that you are thinking about lodging for the same course that I did. There are definitely a few points you should consider before you apply it.
The
first
thing I would do if I were you is to do Linking Words
online-research
about what you are going to learn in Correct your spelling
online research
this
course. As it is named applied mechanical engineering, you have to learn about the combination of mechanical mechanisms and ways of applying Linking Words
Correct pronoun usage
them on
on
daily life. It will cost around 6 to 8 months to finish the course including some exams.
I would suggest you Change preposition
to
to
attend Remove the particle
apply
this
university that I chose because the teaching methods of it will be a good fit for you. Since you are interested equally in doing practically and theoretically, I Linking Words
am assure
that you will easily get Change the verb form
am assured
good
Add an article
a good
grade
too.
You had better think about is to get an entry form as early as possible because they will only accept 100 students. You can get that form from Fix the agreement mistake
grades
university
webpage and Correct article usage
the university
also
available in the PR department.
Anyway, I hope Linking Words
this
is useful. If you need more advice, just drop me a line and don't hesitate to get in touch.
Best wishes,
Tun Naung WinLinking Words
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