You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear David, It was delighting to hear that you are thinking about lodging for the same course that I did. There are definitely a few points you should consider before you apply it. The
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thing I would do if I were you is to do
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about what you are going to learn in
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course. As it is named applied mechanical engineering, you have to learn about the combination of mechanical mechanisms and ways of applying
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daily life. It will cost around 6 to 8 months to finish the course including some exams. I would suggest you
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attend
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university that I chose because the teaching methods of it will be a good fit for you. Since you are interested equally in doing practically and theoretically, I
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that you will easily get
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too. You had better think about is to get an entry form as early as possible because they will only accept 100 students. You can get that form from
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available in the PR department. Anyway, I hope
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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