You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear David, It was delighting to hear that you are thinking about lodging for the same course that I did. There are definitely a few points you should consider before you apply it. The

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thing I would do if I were you is to do

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about what you are going to learn in

this

course. As it is named applied mechanical engineering, you have to learn about the combination of mechanical mechanisms and ways of applying

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them on

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on

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daily life. It will cost around 6 to 8 months to finish the course including some exams. I would suggest you

to

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apply

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attend

this

university that I chose because the teaching methods of it will be a good fit for you. Since you are interested equally in doing practically and theoretically, I

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that you will easily get

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grade

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too. You had better think about is to get an entry form as early as possible because they will only accept 100 students. You can get that form from

university

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webpage and

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available in the PR department. Anyway, I hope

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is useful. If you need more advice, just drop me a line and don't hesitate to get in touch. Best wishes, Tun Naung Win