Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem with transport system in your area. Explain in letter . -describe the situation you are facing -why you consider it a problem -what changes you like to recommend
Dear Sir,
I am Harry, a resident of William Street Colony, Brisbane. I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention towards
a problem with Change preposition
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transportation
system Correct article usage
the transportation
of
our area.
At the onset, as our colony is 25 km far from the main city centre and about 75% of the population of our area is working, the two old Change preposition
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buses
are alloted
on our area transportation route. Correct your spelling
allowed
Hence
, in the mornings, more than 125 people
travel in a bus which has the
capacity of just 80 passengers. Correct article usage
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Thus
, the life of many people
is in danger because of non-
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the non-availablity
availablity
of two more Correct your spelling
availability
buses
. Moreover
, in my consideration, the worst condition of these buses
can not only genrate
possibilities of accidents in future but Correct your spelling
generate
also
can jeopardize the health of many people
due to suffocation issues.
Therefore
, I would like to recommed
some changes Correct your spelling
recommend
in
the existing bus transportation system so that Change preposition
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people
can travel safely. Primarily, if the repair of currently buses
is possible, it can decrease the chances of mishappenings. In addition
, there is a need of
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buses
: one in the morning at 8 am from our colony and second
in the evening at 5:30 pm from the city centre so as to decrease the overload of passengers. I hope you will consider the genuinity of the situation and will act Correct article usage
the second
accordingly
.
Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Harry BrownSubmitted by Mrjit147 on
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