Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem with transport system in your area. Explain in letter . -describe the situation you are facing -why you consider it a problem -what changes you like to recommend

Dear Sir, I am Harry, a resident of William Street Colony, Brisbane. I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention
towards
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a problem with
transportation
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the transportation
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system
of
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our area. At the onset, as our colony is 25 km far from the main city centre and about 75% of the population of our area is working, the two old
buses
are
alloted
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allowed
on our area transportation route.
Hence
, in the mornings, more than 125
people
travel in a bus which has
the
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capacity of just 80 passengers.
Thus
, the life of many
people
is in danger because of
non-
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the non-availablity
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availablity
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availability
of two more
buses
.
Moreover
, in my consideration, the worst condition of these
buses
can not only
genrate
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generate
possibilities of accidents in future but
also
can jeopardize the health of many
people
due to suffocation issues.
Therefore
, I would like to
recommed
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recommend
some changes
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the existing bus transportation system so that
people
can travel safely. Primarily, if the repair of currently
buses
is possible, it can decrease the chances of mishappenings.
In addition
, there is a need
of
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two more
buses
: one in the morning at 8 am from our colony and
second
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in the evening at 5:30 pm from the city centre so as to decrease the overload of passengers. I hope you will consider the genuinity of the situation and will act
accordingly
. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Harry Brown
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