You have been asked to organise a special dinner to celebrate your company’s achievements this year. Write a letter to the restaurant you have chosen. In your letter say why you want to come to the restaurant and when how many people will attend the dinner what special requirements you have You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter because I have selected your restaurant for our annual function to celebrate our company's achievements.
I have chosen the restaurant because of well mannered
and responsible staff and fantastic services.
Correct word choice
well-mannered
Furthermore
, the event will be held next month and approximately one hundred guests accepted to attend the programme. I wish to visit the restaurant,
so that I Remove the comma
apply
could
the venue and and inquire about the arrangements.
Wrong verb form
can see
In addition
, I accept from you to do special attention and order the staff members to do their best. Please be careful about sitting arrangements as well as
the meeting area. I know that there is no need to worry about it because you have the best team to handle the eventRephrase
apply
likewise
.
I hope you never let me down and take my submissions seriously. I shall be grateful for your kindness.
Take care,
Yours Faithfully,
KunwarSubmitted by computersinn2007 on
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Task Response
Review the letter to ensure all the key points are clearly outlined, such as the specific date of the event and any detailed special requirements for the dinner.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider adding more transitions between sentences and paragraphs to enhance the flow of ideas for even greater coherence.
Greeting and Closing
Good use of a formal greeting and closing, which is appropriate for this type of letter.
Logical Structure
Effective overall structure, dividing information into distinct paragraphs representing introduction, event details, and closing remarks.
Complete Response
Clear expression of the main purpose of the letter and specifics about the company's achievement celebration.
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