Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter 1. explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital 2. Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do 3.give details of when you would be available for this work

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter regarding the job opening which is published in the local newspaper the

last

Sunday. I am interested to undertake the volunteer job at your hospital during my spare time. I am pursuing a final year of nursing in the same neighbourhood.

This

opportunity benefits me to get experience and an internship in the field of hospital service which will provide an additional boost to my resume to grab employment in the current hot market. Over the

last

three years, I am seeking extensive trying on managing patients' daily schedules which includes providing timely medicine, injections and food for them.

In addition

, I have experience working in a pharmacy store. As I am a student, during weekdays, I am mostly occupied until evening with the classroom sessions and assignments. I will be available from evening 5 pm to 11 pm.

Besides

that, I can spend all my weekends in the hospital. I hope you consider my application. Looking forward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, JB

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

171 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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