Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter 1. explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital 2. Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do 3.give details of when you would be available for this work

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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letter regarding the job opening which is published in the local newspaper the
last
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Sunday. I am interested to undertake the volunteer job at your hospital during my spare time. I am pursuing a final year of nursing in the same neighbourhood.
This
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opportunity benefits me to get experience and an internship in the field of hospital service which will provide an additional boost to my resume to grab employment in the current hot market. Over the
last
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three years, I am seeking extensive trying on managing patients' daily schedules which includes providing timely medicine, injections and food for them.
In addition
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, I have experience working in a pharmacy store. As I am a student, during weekdays, I am mostly occupied until evening with the classroom sessions and assignments. I will be available from evening 5 pm to 11 pm.
Besides
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that, I can spend all my weekends in the hospital. I hope you consider my application. Looking forward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, JB
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • moreover
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