In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages.

Today in the developed countries by improving technology a lot of people prefer using mobile phone devices for paying anything and some humans do not like carrying bills with them so, in fact, we do have not a lot of money for anything and I think it is fully superb. In my opinion,

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subject has many benefits for the family

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as we do not need to carry pay to buy anything

for example

fruit or clothes or food and in , add it is not essential to have cash for a ticket bus or even for pay for a taxi and I should say

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topic has different advance for citizen and

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people a less problem with the thefts because they have not the plenty of capital for carrying so they do not need worry. after that, In my ,view the government should spend more time and money on developing

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technology because as you know

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is solved the problem of theft and can decrease the rate of crime.

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,the power all the time have been researching how can keep money in the bank and citizens using less the cash so it has been solved and they just have to make a culture for the folk to utilise

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application and Encourage the nation to utilize

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application. In conclusion,if the government want to have better societies they should provide Requirements for the citizens and I think it is really necessary for all people

such

as family and power and that can fix a problem crime,

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we have a life better and easier than with

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application so I believe it has the most advantages for everyone.