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Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #university #education #work #car #mechanics #builders #society
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my interest in a full-time
customer
service
position
 with your company. I read your job posting that appeared on Indeed. I believe my
skills
, experience, knowledge, and willpower for sales/
customer
service
 will make me the best candidate for
this
position
. I am
people-oriented
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 person and able to analyze, prioritize and resolve client requests or issues quickly and effectively. I possess excellent communication
skills
 both oral and written. I have remarkable interpersonal, organizational and time management
skills
. I am well versed in all the Microsoft Office suite applications.
Furthermore
, I learn new applications quickly and efficiently. I am able to support team goals
along with
 finishing my assigned tasks. I have worked as a library assistant,
customer
service
 representative and cashier at a cosmetics products retail store and you can see below some of my responsibilities and achievements. •Experience in selling, promoting and advertising products •Experience in
customer
 relations •Exceptional verifiable talent for ensuring
customer
 satisfaction •Excellent written and verbal presentation
skills
 •Excellent cash handling experience and
skill
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I have a Bachelor’s Degree in Library and Information Science which has given me the opportunity to gain knowledge relative to the
position
such
 as filing, organizing, verbal and written communication, IT
skills
 and people
skills
. I am confident that my education
coupled with
 my relevant experience will allow me to make a substantial contribution to your company. I feel very qualified to fill your
customer
service
position
 and would like to arrange an interview at your earliest convenience. Please feel free to contact me at 587-969-4333 or by email at [email protected] you for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Maryam Shakir
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • higher education
  • vocational training
  • skillset
  • employment landscape
  • economic contributions
  • hands-on experience
  • critical thinking skills
  • practical knowledge
  • tuition fees
  • trade professions
  • essential workforce
  • academic qualifications
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