The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Gay marriage is a controversial topic and
people
divide into 2 types referring to
this
question: the ones who believe that it can bring about many detrimental issues and the others who think
that is
quite normal and a right for
people
to opt for.
This
essay will discuss my take on
this
why gay
marriages
should not be legal.
First
and foremost, taking into consideration that women and men are naturally born different and differ not only physically but psychologically I believe that a family should consist of a male and a female, so I am on the side of
people
who think that
this
kind of
marriages
might really have hazardous effects in general,
therefore
gay
marriages
should not be allowed,
this
I say by being very tolerant to LGBT community. There are countries that have already made gay
marriages
legal,
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I still believe that
this
type of marriage might dramatically change the structure and the value of a family having a huge impact on children. Of
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this
could be of help for the adoption of many children,
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I guess that a kid should be raised by both a man and a woman.
For instance
, being brought up by a gay couple might bring a lot of trauma for children
such
as they might become isolated and labelled as well as do not receive the proper care that a female mother or male father could handle. To conclude,
although
some
people
guess that gay nuptials should be legal and even some countries have adopted
this
as a low, I myself strongly believe that marriage should not be legal as males and females have different peculiarities and there comes an issue of kids that should properly be brought up by males and females.
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