Environmental problems such as pollution and climatic variations are increasing nowadays.The governments have taken some measures at a global level.But they got only few solution.Why is it so? How can this problem be solved?

It is true that many governments have different environmental problems,it is because resolving these problems is not easy.
Although
governments have some idea or thought.I'll write some advice on suggested solutions. My view on
this
issue is that public has many private cars in the flourishing cities nowadays.The city has many due to its densely-population.
Therefore
why governments difficult to solve the matter.I am of the opinion that can give people coupons for public translation. And
then
encourage citizens to take the MTR or bus.That can solve the air pollution problem. On the one hand, the garbage issue is seriously affecting our living environment.My suggestion is to reduce the use of plastic bags and recommend using paper bags or bringing your own.Because paper can be recycled.THE most important thing is to reduce the impact of garbage smell on nature.But many teenagers do not like to bring bags to go outside, they feel very trouble. The issue can be resolved by teaching people how to protect the environment.We can show some voices and advertising make a lot of people watch it a problem.In primary school and high school,the teacher can tell students we are family and need to together protect the homeland.Global warming still needs to work out.They know how to reduce pollution and impact on nature when they are young, and they will become protective of their own urban environment when they grow up.That's the butterfly effect.We can see environmental destruction is a big problem ,so we need to focus to consider environmental concerns.Together preserves the ecosystem.
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