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You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You do not fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter - Say which points in the article you agree with - Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other towns - Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to register a complaint about the magazine service I read in your newspaper that talks about some misinformation related to Istanbul.
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, I agree with some information which defines our local people as frankly and some museums as one of the most visited places in the world. With
this
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 in mind, when a guest visits the town centre, local people encounter hospitality.
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, the article describes the heart of the town as usual
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 it has unique properties
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 as the oldest capital city, old buildings, lots of museums, a well-designed district centre and landmarks. Since the place is the oldest capital, it has the oldest buildings with high-quality architecture, many archaeological museums, and traditional foods. There are a lot of guided tours like ETX tourism that I strongly recommend that you can join and learn much correct information about the metropolis. Guided tours give you a good opportunity to ascertain the soul of the metropolis. Thank you for your consideration and cooperation. Yours faithfully, Yusuf Özdemir
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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