You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

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Dear Sir, Thanks for offering me the position of database administrator in your organization - TTA Inc. My planned joining date is 1 November 2022,

however

, due to sickness I would not be able to meet the joining schedule on that date and I would like to postpone my joining date by one week which is 7th November 2022. I am really sorry that I could not join at the scheduled time and because of that, it might have caused some issues with availability. Let me elaborate my situation,

last

week when I was travelling to my home town, during the travel I might have been in close contact with some co-traveller who had flue, due to that, I got severely infected by flue and doctor told me to take a rest for whole

one week. I hope you understand my situation and accept my apology for not joining on the scheduled day. I will definitely be available on 7th November 2022 at the job location. Yours faithfully, XYZ

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

170 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss the two views and give your own opinion.

ou are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: - introduce yourself  - explain what sort of job you would like  - say what experience and skills you have