Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

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and

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are essential components of modern

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that have allowed for evolution and progress.

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aids in the understanding of fundamental principles of the universe and

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to use

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to improve life quality.Some may argue that

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and

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are put aside in modern

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. In which proportions does modern

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choose

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and

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instead

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of

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and

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? I am convinced that

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and

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are omnipresent today taking the place of

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and

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and I will demonstrate

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with two principal arguments.

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,

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is often a symbol of success with

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to

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topics at an undergraduate and graduate level. For

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young

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are often oriented by their parents

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a scientific path albeit daunting.

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, I am French and currently a student at a polytechnical school in Switzerland. Many

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and especially adults that I talk with often congratulate me on my scientific route. During these conversations, I find that parents have a propensity to encourage their children to learn from me and try to have good grades to be accepted in prestigious scientific schools.

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, I have never heard them promoting other types of activities

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as

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or

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,

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is why I think that

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is at the

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of attention

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a significant impact

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with

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to study.

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, the after war

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has built upon

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and

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speculations on it.

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is the central organ of the modern world and investments in that field are numerous. Our world aims to progress towards an ideal where life becomes easier and

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is why

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pay

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much attention to

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. As an example, Elon musk is one of the archetype investors in

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t domain. He continues to create new corporations related to human evolution through the use of

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.

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,

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frenzy can lead to many adverse impacts on modern

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and feed the current ideal that humanity cannot live without technical improvement.

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results in an overcaring of humans about

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and can

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play in

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to other fields

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as

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and

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. In a nutshell,

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and

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are primordial components of modern

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.

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and arts clearly undergo the weight of

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monopoly and that can lead to a lack of interest of

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in these fields. If humanity continues to follow

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path, not only the environment would suffer, but

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many other fields can be degraded.