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schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study at home. To what extent you agree or disagree?

#schools #children #information #internet #study #home
While some people believe that
children
 can learn things from the
internet
, and make them
study
 at home , others claim that there is nothing bad in going to
school
. From my point of view, I agree with the latter view and think that going to
school
 can
also
 bring many benefits to
children
 in many ways. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in detail. On one hand, the
internet
 become an important part of our life ,especially for
children
. Many adults think that using technology to involve kids' in education is a great way to
study
. Some parents think that their
children
 can search for information on the
internet
 by themselves. It is true that the
internet
 has everything that you have to question but it can lead your kid in a negative way more than you thought.
On the other hand
, the obvious of letting your kids learn through the
internet
 can make they can not merge into society. To illustrate, students who
study
 through the
internet
 will not have social
skills
such
 as communication
skills
 and basic
skills
. These
skills
 are essential for
children
 in the future.
Moreover
, the resource on the
internet
 might be fake so
this
 can leads your, child, to know incorrect information.
In addition
, going to
school
 is very important because they can play and
study
 along with their friends. To summarize, it is true that students should use technology in daily life to look up the information , but
also
 need to go to
school
 to make some real friends not online friends and improve social
skills
.
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