Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

While some

people

believe that it is advantageous for firms to promote themselves by sponsoring sports, others argue that there are detrimental effects to

this

action. I will provide an explanation

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both sides of

this

statement in the following paragraphs.

Firstly

,

athletes

could build positive images for the

companies

if they become successful. Sponsorship from the

companies

could benefit the

athletes

who are unable to afford satisfactory sports equipment. With better sport wears,

athletes

can perform better during competitions,

thus

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a higher chance of winning medals, which in

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build a good reputation for the

companies

.

Secondly

, society is encouraged to exercise. With adequate funds from the

companies

, there would be an increase in publicity and popularity for a particular sport.

This

would encourage

people

to pick up the sports and start exercising, thereby promoting a healthy lifestyle in society.

On the other hand

, sponsorship from

companies

is heavily dependent on the chosen

athletes

. If a player is involved in criminal activities

such

as illegal

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usage, society would have a negative impression

towards

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the sponsoring

companies

. Another disadvantage is that certain

companies

could advocate unhealthy habits to the public.

For example

, increase publicity in cigarettes company or junk food

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could cause more

people

to smoke or eat junk food. It is common that

people

would tend to support the

companies

that sponsor their

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players.