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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the world saw an increase in sorts of
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. In different countries, a handful of
people
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 believe that it is essential to expend an enormous amount of
money
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 on building new railways
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 particular, very fast trains between cities. Meanwhile, others argue that enhancing existing public
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 is the thing ought to spend on it. In
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 essay, I will discuss that the
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 should expend on existing public
transport
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.
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 with, nowadays, very fast trains have become crucial transportation, and help numerous
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 to achieve their destination in a short time.
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 of that,
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 would encourage
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 to travel and visit new places.
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, tourism will prosper which, can return to many benefits
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 economic. To illustrate, when the country provides
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 kind of transportation, a bunch of tourists will come to it, in order to visit some historic buildings and different places over a brief period.
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, the expanses of tourists that consist of hotels and food and even more clothing will flourish the economy indirectly.
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, the actual public
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 is vital for society and ought to spend a massive amount of
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 on it.
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, it would be benefited
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 and employees.
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, many students and employees commute to their destination whether work or university through current public
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such
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 buses and taxis.
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, working to improve
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 type of
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 by funding it well, will facilitate the movement
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 during peak times and the roads become less crowded. What is more,
people
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 will reach their destinations the right with convenient and comfortable conditions.
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, it will enhance their productivity in study and work. To sum up, building new railway lines is great, as it will prosper the tourism but the most important is to spend
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 on the actual public
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 which, has an effect on individuals and in society.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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