Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

In

this

contemporary era, technology has changed enormously. Wherever people have many

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to acquire technological applications which help them take

life

convenient in society.

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, currently, through the

tele-communication

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telecommunication

telecommunications

access, human beings are trying to interact with others in

a

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various ways. Even though some argued it has advantageous factors while others demonstrated it has only negative

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progress

in their

life

. I completely agree

,

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this

has positive progress for us and I will prove my opinion

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following paragraphs.

To begin

with, the advent of

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technology has entirely

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communication ways compared to the past, wherever they are able to create healthy relationships through the

tele-communication

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telecommunication

telecommunications

platforms for a better

life

.

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,

the

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student who

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studied

on

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foreign countries have a great opportunity to talk with their beloved ones through technological gadgets

such

as mobile

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phones

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and

laptop

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laptops

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.

Consequently

, whenever it paves the way to interact with others easily and they have the capability to make

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bond

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of relationships as well as it assists to overcome the homesick feelings.

In addition

, nowadays, computer-based communication premises have been helped particularly students and

businessman

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due to

pandemic

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the pandemic

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crisis. Since the covid-19 issue created a huge impact on schools as well as job-related organizations because they have

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to utilize digital access to do their daily activities

similarly

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other days.

For instance

, presently, school children have done online sessions through technological equipment to interact

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teachers for learning curriculum.

This

way

is exactly attains

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them to do their school work with

teacher's

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guidance.

As a result

, they have a chance to make a productive relationship with their school teachers to do studies. In conclusion, in my perspective, I believe it has a positive impact on

human

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by using these modern gadgets and significantly it attains to make good bond among the communities. If we choose to use

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a productive work which

help

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them to develop our

life

, we will acquire more benefits through

this

.