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at school, children should either be taught to compete or to cooperate. in your opinion, which form of education would best benefit society as a whole? describe both sides of the argument and explain your own opinion

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It is believed that
children
 shall be taught to compete or to cooperate. Personally, the most suitable education form which effectively works for the whole society regarding
this
 issue is the group discussion based on
problem solving
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 in the early age stages that
provides
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 chances for
children
 to cooperate with each other companies.
To begin
 with, my statement would argue the notion since the will to compete does not
oftenly
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often
 a good feature of a person.
For instance
, in
daily
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 work-life of adulthood, the will to
compete
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 might leads
into
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 jealousy between peers and instantly
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 an unhealthy work-life environment.
Thus
,
to teach
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 the
children
 how to compete would not be a very good option.
However
, I believe as well that
children
 will have to be ready to get into any competition they might face in life
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 because it is the only option to survive. As a resolution, the best way to teach them to survive in competitions is to teach them how to compete with themselves for
self improvement
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.
Instead
 of having the will to compete, I believe as well that
children
 should be taught how to cooperate. Bringing in the will to cooperate
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 early age will give them the opportunity to perceive the importance of networking in problem
solvings
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solving
 and how to grow
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 mindset by receiving different points of view.
Children
 who are able to adapt well
in
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 a group possess the ability to bring
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many solutions
in
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 solving issues since they are sharing various perspectives.
Hence
, the provided
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 would be rich. As an example, we can give a certain task of
problem solving
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issue
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 to the
children
 of a class which is divided
in
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 two separate groups. The quest
in particular
 would be to build a model robot.
The
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first
 team is a group of average students, and the other one
consisting
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 of the smartest
one
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 to work individually. There would be a huge possibility that the average
children
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 would produce a robot with so many features in comparison to the smart child who
tend
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 to work
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 model robot
by
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 his own. The child might as well
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 period in performing the given task.
Therefore
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 a conclusion, I suggest that
children
 shall be taught
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how to compete and to cooperate in
such
 a way that they can manage themselves to avoid jealousy and learn how to improve their perspectives in solving issues
by
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 the collaboration they built as a team.
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