Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on Society as a whole?

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Several societies are still struggling with illiteracy in the modern world. There seem to be two leading causes and some effects on
this
issue which will be discussed in the essay. Possibly, the prime cause would be poverty, especially in undeveloped
countries
.
This
matter is mostly
due to
the economic turbulences, unemployment, and the ever-rising number of
lowering-income
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people
.
Therefore
, the deprived
people
cannot pay the high rate of educational affairs. The second reason appears to be the lack of an appropriate educational system in some less-affluent
countries
, mainly in some
countries
in which the governments allocate a considerable proportion of their budgets to the civil war. It seems that a balance between the institutions' buildings and the population cannot be established.
Furthermore
, they are probably not able to afford educational expenses like books, educational aids, and, more importantly, skilled teachers.
As a result
, many children are deprived of education and remain illiterate. The effect of
this
problem on societies can be pretty irreversible.
Firstly
, poverty impacts all aspects of
people
's lives, especially in the educational system. Since deprived
people
are struggling with their primary needs for life, they cannot meet the expense of their children's training. So the children remain illiterate or less- literate. The illiteracy issue will
be continued
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in the next generation;
likewise
, less-literate or illiterate parents are not qualified to find an appropriate job. A
further
widely observed effect is on lack of sufficient educational structure in the civil war involvement
countries
, which has a long-term and fundamental impact on the nation's ability to improve.
To conclude
, poverty and long-term civil war seem to be the main causes of illiteracy in societies. They considerably affect the nation's fundamental education and improvement in all aspects.
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task response
Clear and comprehensive ideas
coherence and cohesion
Develop logical structure
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Literacy
  • Illiteracy
  • Poverty
  • Access
  • Educational resources
  • Social inequality
  • Discrimination
  • Gender disparity
  • Racial bias
  • Cultural norms
  • Technological advances
  • Political instability
  • Disruption
  • Education systems
  • Socioeconomic status
  • Job prospects
  • Health implications
  • Self-esteem
  • Empowerment
  • Economic growth
  • Social cohesion
  • Civic participation
  • Democratic processes
  • Exclusion
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