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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking frined. In your letter -explain why you have moved -describe the new house -invite your friend to come and visit

#house #-explain #-describe #-invite #friend #visit
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Hello dear adam I have to move to the village because it was really noisy there and I could not tolerate it over there and that city was
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 too pollution for all of these reasons lead to I will leave there and I had very problems that I can not explain those, I was in a hurry that I was not remember that I notify to you, you know that how much I like you
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 you was the best neighbour, I have ever seen. I am really comfortable in my new house and in my village is very quiet and I have a little garden and I have more activity in compare city,
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, there are many magnificent landscapes here, I have a request from you, please do not decline that,
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, I want to invite you to come here and you see my home and you help me for designing my home, not only I hope to meet you really soon but
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 I want to decide to save you of city pollution. Best regards I will look forward to meeting you
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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