You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking frined. In your letter -explain why you have moved -describe the new house -invite your friend to come and visit

#house #-explain #-describe #-invite #friend #visit

Hello dear adam I have to move to the village because it was really noisy there and I could not tolerate it over there and that city was

also

too pollution for all of these reasons lead to I will leave there and I had very problems that I can not explain those, I was in a hurry that I was not remember that I notify to you, you know that how much I like you

also

you was the best neighbour, I have ever seen. I am really comfortable in my new house and in my village is very quiet and I have a little garden and I have more activity in compare city,

in addition

, there are many magnificent landscapes here, I have a request from you, please do not decline that,

thus

, I want to invite you to come here and you see my home and you help me for designing my home, not only I hope to meet you really soon but

also

I want to decide to save you of city pollution. Best regards I will look forward to meeting you

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5 paragraphs

186 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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