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Describe a trip that you plan to go in the near future Where Who you would like to go with What would you do there Explain why you would like to go there

#trip #plan #future
I would like to talk about my
plan
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 tour in the near future with my family. I intend to go to Dalat city
in
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 the end of
this
 month. Honestly,
this
 is an opportunity for my family to fully gather together.
Moreover
, my main plan
of
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this
 trip is to celebrate my
mom
's birthday. My dad's mission will be to buy a small birthday cake while I decorate a couple of colourful balloons around our hotel room. My
mom
 especially doesn't know about
this
 her party, so my dad and I have to do all the organization in secret. I hope my
mom
 will love everything
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 we do for her
,
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 because she is a kind
of
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typical Asia
mom
, she has to work hard for the family
,
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 and spend almost time
for
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children
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. She deserves what my dad and I do for her
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 our Dalat trip. In conclusion, I am really excited about my future trip. I hope
this
 will be a memorable moment not only for me but
also
 for my parents.
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