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Young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantage?

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It is true that
youngsters
 from rural
areas
 move to the
cities
 to learn or work. There is a number of reasons for
this
 movement and I think the drawbacks of
this
 are outweighed by the benefits. With regard to reasons for
youngsters
 leaving their homes in the countryside, they often become tired and bored from the work they accomplish there.
In other words
, from early childhood
people
 living in rural
areas
 start to help their parents working in fields as adults. It continues until the end of their life if they will not escape, as in these
areas
 citizens mostly live on agriculture.
Moreover
, in the
cities
,
people
 see more opportunities to try new things. There are not any big businesses or anything that could entertain
youngsters
, while is a big variety in towns.
For instance
, there is a large number of workplaces where
people
 accomplish quite different jobs. On the one hand, moving to other places young
people
 diminish their communication with their family members. As there is a big distance between them
people
 can only talk by phone at a convenient time for both, students and family members which is quite hard to find.
For example
,
people
 in
cities
 mostly get up and go to bed late, while their counterparts in villages prefer to do everything early.
On the other hand
, there are many opportunities for the future of
youngsters
 in towns. all big companies and factories are concentrated here so
people
 can move fastly in their careers and earn more living in developed infrastructure. As an example, there is only cultivation of crops in rural
areas
, while in
cities
 it is possible to start big businesses. In conclusion, leaving their houses young
people
 can escape their routine which would continue for ages as well as find out about new things for them.
Although
youngsters
 can not communicate with their relatives as before moving out they have many opportunities to improve their life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration
  • Urbanization
  • Educational institutions
  • Job prospects
  • Wages
  • Economic growth
  • Cultural exchange
  • Overpopulation
  • Cost of living
  • Rural depopulation
  • Social isolation
  • Traditional values
  • Personal growth
  • Recreational activities
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