Write a letter to the landlord about the unavailability of hotwater. State your reason for writing. Describe the problems and explain how you feel. Propose a solution and ask the landlord to take actions.

#landlord #unavailability #hotwater #reason #actions

Dear Mr Rupert, I am writing to inform you of the unavailability of hot

water

due to a mechanical fault in the solar

water

heater panel. The situation has become intolerable. Let me explain my situation in more detail. As you know, we are transitioning into the early winter period and without hot

water

, maintaining personal hygiene is challenging or rather very uncomfortable; Especially in the morning hours, the

water

is too cold to touch.

Therefore

, I am not able to take care of my basic needs. Would you kindly consider the solution I suggest? If I could get an electric

water

heater, until the solar panel gets fixed,

then

I could manage my circumstances well. I believe

this

is a cheap and quick action we can implement. I request you to take

this

matter with utmost priority and resolve it. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Krish

Submitted by krishsri08 on Fri Jun 03 2022

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