You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

Dear Sam, Hope you are having a great time at your native. While I am enjoying the stay at your place by taking care of your belongings and plants, I feel sorry to let you know that I inadvertently broke your antique
glass
centre
table
.
Last
weekend, I
had
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invited my friends to while away the time. It was a late evening when we sat in the lounge area and watched a movie. I had specially prepared flavoured popcorn for us to munch during the film. As I was about to place the popcorn maker on the centre
table
, it slipped off my hands and cracked the
glass
table
.
Moreover
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as I bent to pick that up, I toppled over it and the
glass
top broke into myriad pieces. I was disheartened to see your one of the favourite
table
-top breaking down,
however
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I have already checked online sites for a brand new centre
table
, it looks appealing and is made of wood
instead
of
glass
. I will share a few pictures for you to take a call. I feel apologetic for being clumsy, looking forward to hearing your choice for the new
table
. With regards, Devika
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