You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear Sam, Hope you are having a great time at your native. While I am enjoying the stay at your place by taking care of your belongings and plants, I feel sorry to let you know that I inadvertently broke your antique

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invited my friends to while away the time. It was a late evening when we sat in the lounge area and watched a movie. I had specially prepared flavoured popcorn for us to munch during the film. As I was about to place the popcorn maker on the centre

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, it slipped off my hands and cracked the

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as I bent to pick that up, I toppled over it and the

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top broke into myriad pieces. I was disheartened to see your one of the favourite

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-top breaking down,

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I have already checked online sites for a brand new centre

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, it looks appealing and is made of wood

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. I will share a few pictures for you to take a call. I feel apologetic for being clumsy, looking forward to hearing your choice for the new

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. With regards, Devika

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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