In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parent's absence. Discussion

Nowadays, the world changed to

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more competitive, and that leads to fathers and mothers finding a job. Some argue that it is important to raise the income of the family,

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others say that

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causes many problems

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their absence. The main problem

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causes is that

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feel neglected and the best solution is starting a publicity campaign in the media. Working is

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of the life essentials to provide the family with food and clothes,

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, if two

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worked no

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would stay home and take care of the

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. Because of that, some

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may hire a nanny to

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their place.

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,

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will feel neglected and overwhelmed because even though they have

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but still no

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is taking care of their emotions. Some after growing up may start doing criminal actions to satisfy themselves. To tackle

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problem, governments should start launching a publicity campaign in schools and in the media to educate people about the danger of leaving their babies at home without considering their mental health. These campaigns could shed some light on the issues of not taking care of

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and raise the awareness of

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about

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situation.

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New York magazine, social experts believe that 37% of

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who have both

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working tend to have a big chance of criminal attitudes.

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way it is significant to have at least a

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parent. In conclusion, many believe that women and men should both work to increase their financial income,

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, others believe that at least

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parent should stay home with

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. The primary issue behind it is that some

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may feel neglected, and the main solution is to start a publicity campaign

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the government.