You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write letter to your friend. In your letter: —Describe why are you having a party —Give directions on how to get to the venue —suggest how you can accommodate him/her Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses

#party #friend #city #—describe #—give #directions #venue #—suggest #addresses

Dear Brian, I'm writing to invite you to my party

that is

going to hold on the 20th of

month. Having survived that ghastly accident

last

year, I felt it was right to celebrate the right to live which I still have.

This

might seem off, but I have to explain in detail the reason for

this

party.

Firstly

, God has been so good to me and my family. Ever since I had that crash, I have been battling with lower knee pain but recently, I had

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minor surgery and the pain as far as I can tell, has gone.

Secondly

, I just acquired a new car and guess what? , It's a Chevvy brother!!.

Also

, the venue for the party is our new crib just after Delaware public school. The direction is quite straight, all you have to do is to pick a taxi from the city council and tell them "spooky area". I will be waiting for your call when you get there. Don't bother about accommodation as I have made plans for you and a few other friends of mine. You can come along with your sister if you wish. I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes Obinna

Submitted by obinna.omeoga on Fri Jun 03 2022

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

205 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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