Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.
It is often argued that high-wage salaries are way more important than
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. I partially agree with the said notion. Use synonyms
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satisfaction
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, a number of arguments surround my opinion.
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satisfaction
is very important as it involves most of a human's life span. To put it another way, a place where you work always becomes your second home as you finish up with your studies and eventually get a Use synonyms
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's life hell as they will be spending most of their day working on something which they don't even like.
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