Nowadays, more and more children are being brought up by single parents family. What are the cause of this? What effects can be seen as a result of this?

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With the development of society, the number of foul-ups that
people
might come across is surging. As a consequence, these days, many families have been splitting up and
also
,and a large portion of young generations has to grow up in the broken home with single mothers or fathers. As far as I am concerned, I will explore some causes of
this
and consider how
this
affects the growth environment that
children
have , giving some feasible examples in
this
essay. On the one hand, one of the major causes is social status. What I mean by
this
, Majority of families, especially women do their best to possess the highest quality of life conditions to keep abreast with other
people
.
For instance
,
people
in current society try to purchase a piece of furniture, car and modern electronic equipment which are not valuable for money abroad and
this
is a heavy burden for the least privileged classes, as well as, average
people
,
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since they should earn much more money for family maintenance and have to provide their
children
with a quality education.
Hence
, all of these reasons for the broken home
that is
developed by breaking up of spouses each other,
besides
young siblings are divided into two home and
this
exacerbates both life and behaviour of
children
who are brought up by single
parents
family.
Secondly
, another cause is related to the personal relationships which
parents
own. It has long been proved that forever family depends on a perfect family tie and true love,
therefore
both wife and husband(mother and father) hold each other in high regard,
also
, get on like a house on fire, being honest and loyal. When one's spouse is confronted with a complicated situation, he or she should and can support and give a helping hand.
However
, currently, none of the
parents
knows to motivate or forgive each other when they have genuine misunderstandings. So, naturally,
this
kind of
parents
' attitude undoubtedly impacts their
children
, initiating to avoid studying and walking on the criminal roads. To sum up, I personally think the family environment plays a pivotal role in the lifestyle of
children
.
Thus
parents
do their utmost to release divorce.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Divorce rates
  • Societal acceptance
  • Stigmatized
  • Economic independence
  • Unplanned pregnancies
  • Financial strain
  • Emotional and psychological effects
  • Feelings of abandonment
  • Secure attachments
  • Increased stress and burnout
  • Balancing responsibilities
  • Stronger bonds
  • Independence and resilience
  • Primary caregiving role
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