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young people who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adults by authorities. Agree or Disagree?

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It would be argued by some that the youth
people
 who are wrongdoers should be punished just like mature
people
. In my opinion,
i
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 believe that it should need to depend on other cases. On the one hand,
people
 think that all dangerous crimes should be solved by heavy punishment. It is true that youngsters are an alarming issue these days. Severe punishment could act as a deterrent to those
people
intend
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who intend
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 to commit crimes.
Furthermore
, if young offenders receive leniency from authorities, they will not aware of their unlawful
behavior
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 and adverse consequences and
thus
, they can re-offend.
This
 lead to danger for
people
 around them and a threat to the whole society.
On the other hand
, I believe that
however
, there are some cases that commit crimes by young could not same compared with mature wrongdoers.
Firstly
, sometimes
children
 break the law just because they mimic the
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 of adults or they are forced to do so.
For example
, there are some cases
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that
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where
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 mature offenders give
children
 a box and do not tell them what is inside, after that
children
 are forced to deliver
to
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it to
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 other
people
. When
children
 are busted, they know it is drugs and they have to take full responsibility for that.
Therefore
 if authorities put them in jail, it is regrettable for the
next
 generation.
Furthermore
, some young commit murder just because they want to
self-defense
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 or protect their relatives.
For example
, my
neighbor
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neighbour
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 has a case very regrettable about that. She has a son and her husband always hit her after drinking alcohol. One time, her son witnessed his father's violence
with
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toward
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 his mother and he just wanted to protect his mother. After that, he
was kill
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 his father. In conclusion, the reasons mentioned above. I believe that young wrongdoers should be not punished just like adults.
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