In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Consuming junk

food

has been popular these days. In some nations, many folks are experiencing life-

threating

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threatening

diseases due to consuming convenient

food

.

Thus

, it is essential for the

government

to increase the

tax

of

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this

kind of meal. In my perspective, I disagree with

this

argument as it will give

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effect

to

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the small business and

this

habit will not be

longlasting

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.

This

essay will elucidate the detailed opinions. On the one hand, generating

this

regulation might cause an instant effect as people might immediately stop eating

this

menu.

Moreover

, if the authority offers some additional consequences for those who still consume a high amount of

this

food

,

society

will certainly never consume it again.

For instance

, recently, the

government

has increased the price of petrol that

makes

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people convert their cooking method from petrol to gas. It is because

the

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society

could not afford to buy it and try to find

the

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alternative way in solving

this

problem.

On the other hand

,

this

practice might present several impacts.

Firstly

, It could offer detrimental effects

to

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the small businesses as they have

increase

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the price of their products which

cause

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the

lose

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of their customers.

Consequently

, they might have to close their businesses and try another occupation, unlike they become

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burden for the countries.

For instance

, recently, in Indonesia, the

government

has increased the

tax

of

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palm oil which encourage

society

to use

another resource

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other resources

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for cooking

such

as air frying.

Nevertheless

, the palm oil resellers gain some

loses

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due to

this

trend.

Secondly

,

this

new habit of

less-consuming

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this

cuisine will not stay

longer

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as they do not have

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reason why they have to stop eating that comfort menu.

Then

, when the

government

take down

this

tax

system,

society

will start eating

this

convenient

food

over and over. To conclude,

tax

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system

excel

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to change people’s behaviour instantly.

Nonetheless

, I have an opposite opinion as it might generate a new problem for the authority due to a high

number of

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unemployment.

Besides

, people might have a wrong perspective of why they have to stop buying

this

meal.

Accordingly

, the

government

should provide alternative jobs for small businesses

who

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will be impacted by the regulation and

also

educate

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society

about

this

issue by giving them a massive campaign.