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Many people thought that children have to do homework in their free time. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, people started to believe that children must not waste their day by doing any auxiliary task rather they need to utilize the
time
 by doing their homework. The practice is needed to be completed on
time
 but I think children have to use their free
time
 to explore more things.
To begin
 with, it is very important for an heir that they have to stay attentive during their class moment. Because it is very obvious that practice is being given based on class topics. If the
students
 fail to keep themselves focused on their studies, they will not get the required quality in the assignments. It can be seen that the
students
 who do homework in their study
time
 get distracted. They should use their spare
time
 to do the home task. In idle
time
, the mind of the
students
 remains fresh and the brain works more perfectly.
As a result
, the home task riches to maximum quality.
However
, the spare age has to be passed by some other activities which can remove tiredness.
Students
 become busy doing their school most of the stage. Though they have to keep some moments for appointments, other portions of the day should be used for the mind refreshing tasks. They can explore outside and pass some moments with nature. Because these activities will eliminate the tiredness of the body and prepare themselves for the
next
 period of study.
For example
, they can join in gaming or visit some beautiful places. Since children have to spend much of their hours in the study, they generally do their homework during their idle season.
Although
 completing assignments in their free hour can increase the quality, they
also
 have to spend some of their spare stages doing other activities
also
. It would prepare them for the
next
 day of their routine.
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