All students should study a foreign language in school, starting in their earliest grades. To What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Many people believe that
children
should learn a foreign
language
other than their mother tongue at
school
at the beginning of their
school
year. In my opinion, I completely agree with the proposed idea, because
children
at a much younger
age
have greater learning abilities.
In addition
, they do not feel burdened with additional subjects in high
school
because they have been introduced to foreign
languages
​​from early life.
Children
have a greater potential to learn new things at a younger
age
.
This
is comparable to a baby who doesn't know a word at birth but quickly accepts it from parents and adults.
For example
, in Sri Lanka, before the 1990s, English was introduced to
children
in secondary schools, but after much research, teachers realized that primary
school
students could understand it more quickly in secondary schools themselves.
Therefore
, it makes more sense to introduce
language
skills at an early
age
.
In addition
, high
school
students have to study many advanced subjects during their
school
years. If a foreign
language
is introduced
in addition
to these subjects, it means an additional burden for them, and they do not have the pace to study it until the end of their studies.
For example
, the majority of Sri Lankan students do not choose to study foreign
languages
​​
such
as French or Japanese when they are introduced into their curriculum at regular and advanced levels because of the additional effort required to master those
languages
​​in less time period. In short, the child has a greater potential to learn a new
language
when it is introduced at an early
age
. It
also
gives them more time to learn foreign
languages
​​if they are introduced in their early academic years. So I support the idea of ​​introducing a child to a foreign
language
if it is more adaptive.
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