You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear
Mr.
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John, I am Smith Andrew and
this
has reference to our meeting during the accident of my
car
on
highway
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the highway
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. I am writing to say thanks for the help you did during
car
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a car
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crash. I will be
indabted
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indebted
inhabited
forever for the assistance provided by you during
crushial
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crucial
time. That was a horrific day when I met an accident while travelling back to my native place. The rear tire of my
car
got burst, lost
the
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control and hit
to
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the truck. I was so scared by
this
accident. It would have been
a
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difficult for me to replace the tire with
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a spare-one
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spare-one
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if you were not there. Your presence provided me
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a
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enough courage and help to put my
car
back on track. I request you and your family to visit my place and spend some time with us during
forthcoming
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school vacation. I am looking forward
for
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your positive response.
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sincerely, Mack Hill
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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